Okay, I'm glad to see you've started on your storyboard. Are you planning to add more images? A storyboard details the specific 'beats' of what is happening in the scene and the performance of the character. In these storyboards we only get a general (very vague) sense of what is happening, how, and where - To be honest if I didn't know anything about your film I wouldn't be able to understand what is happening in most cases. In short, six images per scene (drawn at the wrong ratio - see OGR post /16:9) is not enough to describe what is 'specifically' happening in your film. I suggest picking one scene (skit) as a test case, correcting the ratio, and then fleshing out to become a full storyboard. For example...
Okay, I'm glad to see you've started on your storyboard. Are you planning to add more images? A storyboard details the specific 'beats' of what is happening in the scene and the performance of the character. In these storyboards we only get a general (very vague) sense of what is happening, how, and where - To be honest if I didn't know anything about your film I wouldn't be able to understand what is happening in most cases. In short, six images per scene (drawn at the wrong ratio - see OGR post /16:9) is not enough to describe what is 'specifically' happening in your film. I suggest picking one scene (skit) as a test case, correcting the ratio, and then fleshing out to become a full storyboard. For example...
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